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第 16–17 页

划线七段 291 词 · 课文约 850L · 👂⁠ ⁠家⁠长⁠盲⁠听⁠过⁠ ⁠4⁠9⁠ ⁠处

54／100

第 17 页读得顺，第 16 页卡得多

准确度19/30

流利度15/30

断句语调13/25

发音7/15

四项加起来 100 分：准确度 30 · 流利度 30 · 断句语调 25 · 发音 15。上一次 58 分。

✏️ 下次读之前

🌿爬山虎法凑近看，看仔细了吗？

每个词看到最后一个字母

be·lieved相信rat·tles响环leg腿warned警告

词尾：上次 4 次 → 这次 3 次

📊 四个数字

92.4%读对 269/291 词

72每分钟正确词数

223秒读完全段

91次停顿

↗️ 和 10/23 比

准确率~~95.3%~~ → 92.4%−2.9

正确词/分75 → 72−3

几个词一停~~3.0~~ → 3.2 词+0.2

停顿占时长~~26%~~ → 22%−4

课文蓝思~~1020L~~ → 850L易了 170L

都是点读视频，可以直接比；这次是 iPhone 直接拍的原片，10/23 是转过来的 mp4。两次都是新内容的第一遍，单词表也都是单独录的一段。

📝 细说

这次读了第 16–17 页的划线，291 个词错了 22 处，没有 10/23 读得准：

第 17 页读得顺 —— 126 个词错 9 处，一处卡壳都没有
词的最后一个音没读准 —— rattles 少了 -s、leg 多了 -s，warned、tied、drown 的尾音也岔了
recently 读出来了 —— 前面试了三下，最后读对了
过去时少丢了 —— 10/23 是四处，这次只有 believed 一处
单词表念对 16 个 —— 比 10/23 多 3 个；bracelet、wrecked、initials 这次都念准了

🌟 读得好的地方

I pretended to inquire

原文朗读

这次读的

I made up a story about why I was here.

原文朗读

这次读的

On the fifth day, he began to feel better.

原文朗读

这次读的

Finally, they decided to leave him there

原文朗读

这次读的

who was recently murdered

原文朗读

这次读的

inquire 是个新词，一次读对了。一句话一口气读下来，没停没错。这一句读得很顺。这半句读得很顺。recently 试了三下，最后读对了。

⏱ 这 230 秒长什么样

在读句末停顿 · 19 次句中长停 ≥0.8 秒 · 10 次句中短停 · 62 次

①

rattles and tie it

3.0 秒and 后面停了 3 秒

💭 手链做好了，要怎么戴到 Jim 的手腕上？
②

The woman invited me

3.3 秒invited 后面先读成 to，又退回去重读

💭 谁请谁进屋？invited 后面紧跟着的是哪个词？
③

who was recently murdered

4.7 秒先出来 red、risen、today，停了快 5 秒

💭 拆成 recent 和 -ly，recent 你在哪儿见过？
④

She told me the boy's father

4.7 秒先读成 she told me that，又从头读

💭 told me 后面接的是 that 还是 the？手指指着看一眼

有几段不是在读，扣掉了：翻页 5.5 秒、读完了 2.0 秒。

📄 这次读了 2 页

第 16 页4.3-138.2 秒 · 165 词 · 计错 13 处 · 语速 74 词/分

第 17 页143.6-228.4 秒 · 126 词 · 计错 9 处 · 语速 89 词/分

第 16 页更吃力：错的比第 17 页多，四处卡壳全在这一页；第 17 页一口气读下来，每分钟多读 15 个词。

🔍 逐字比对 · 22 处

点词听读音 · 绿是这个词的标准音 · 红是她读的那一句

原文When it was time for bed, Jim let¹ out a scream. The dead² snake's mate crawled in and bit his foot! I killed it with a stick. Jim believed³ in⁴ old-fashioned ways to save himself from a snake's poison. He asked me to roast⁵ the snake and give him a piece to eat. He also told me to make a bracelet from the snake's rattles⁶ and tie it around his wrist⁷ to keep him safe.

原文 · 第 21 段

实读When it was time for bed, Jim lights¹ out a scream. The day² snake's mate crawled in and bit his foot! I killed it with a stick. Jim believes³ an⁴ old-fashioned ways to save himself from a snake's poison. He asked me to rot⁵ the snake and give him a piece to eat. He also told me to make a bracelet from the snake's rattle⁶ and tie it around his breast⁷ to keep him safe.

目标75 个词全对、48 秒读完就 perfect

这次读的

16.8 秒。let 读成了像 lights 的音
29.6 秒。dead 读成了 day
320.4 秒。believed 读成 believes
421.4 秒。in 读成 an
532.3 秒。前面停了 3 秒，roast 的 s 没出来
649.7 秒。rattles 的 -s 没出来
757.2 秒。wrist 读成 breast

原文Jim's foot and leg⁸ swelled⁹ up and stayed that way for four days. On the fifth day, he began to feel better. But Jim warned¹⁰ me that the bad luck¹¹ had not come to its end.

原文 · 第 22 段

实读Jim's foot and legs⁸ rolled⁹ up and stayed that way for four days. On the fifth day, he began to feel better. But Jim warmed¹⁰ me that the back clock¹¹ had not come to its end.

目标36 个词全对、23 秒读完就 perfect

这次读的

865.6 秒。leg 多读了 -s
966.2 秒。swelled 读成 rolled
1078.5 秒。warned 的 n 读成了 m
1181.1 秒。bad luck 读成了 back clock

原文The woman invited me into her house. I made up a story about why I was here. Then she began to talk about Huckleberry Finn, who was recently murdered. I pretended to inquire who the killer might be. She told me the boy's father or the runaway slave, Jim¹², probably killed the poor boy.

原文 · 第 23 段

实读The woman invited me into her house. I made up a story about why I was here. Then she began to talk about Huckleberry Finn, who was recently murdered. I pretended to inquire who the killer might be. She told me the boy's father or the runaway slave, （漏读）¹², probably killed the poor boy.

目标54 个词全对、34 秒读完就 perfect

这次读的

12134.8 秒。slave 后面直接接了 probably

原文Before we left, I built a campfire to fool the men who were looking for Jim. Then we stayed on a¹³ raft that we found several days ago. We put all¹⁴ our things and the canoe onto¹⁵ the raft, and Jim even built a hut on it. At day time, we watched the big steamboats in the shade. At night, we floated down the river.

原文 · 第 25 段

实读Before we left, I built a campfire to fool the men who were looking for Jim. Then we stayed on the¹³ raft that we found several days ago. We put （漏读）¹⁴ our things and the canoe into¹⁵ the raft, and Jim even built a hut on it. At day time, we watched the big steamboats in the shade. At night, we floated down the river.

目标65 个词全对、41 秒读完就 perfect

这次读的

13163.9 秒。a 读成 the
14169.8 秒。put 后面直接接了 our
15173.5 秒。onto 读成 into

原文I peeked¹⁶ into a cabin on the wrecked boat and saw a¹⁷ man¹⁸ tied¹⁹ up and two men arguing²⁰ whether to shoot him or not. Finally, they decided to leave him there to drown²¹ as they rowed away.

原文 · 第 26 段

实读I big¹⁶ into a cabin on the wrecked boat and saw the¹⁷ men¹⁸ tried¹⁹ up and two men are going²⁰ whether to shoot him or not. Finally, they decided to leave him there to draw²¹ as they rowed away.

目标38 个词全对、24 秒读完就 perfect

这次读的

16191.1 秒。peeked 没读出来
17201.2 秒。a 读成 the
18201.5 秒。man 读成 men，一个人变成了几个人
19201.9 秒。tied 多了个 r，读成 tried
20206.2 秒。arguing 读成了 are going
21215.3 秒。drown 的 n 没出来，读成 draw

🌀 读了两遍才接上的地方 · 6 处

When When it was time for bed

invited to invited me into her house

then he Then she began to talk

pretended pretended to inquire who

she told me that She told me the boy's father

the two men arguing whether

2.3 秒。开头起了个头又重来88.0 秒。invited 后面先读成 to，退回去重读100.0 秒。she 先读成 he，自己改了114.2 秒。pretended 读了两遍125.8 秒。先读成 told me that，又从头读204.6 秒。two 前面多了个 the

🔤 念第 3–7 页单词表（单独录的一段） · 28 个词

读对 16 · 试了几下才出来 4 · 要听一下 8

点词听她念的那一下

gang帮派像 gone
invest投资
target目标
make-believe虚构的像 make live
catch捕获物
saw锯子像 south
canoe独木舟
bracelet手链
wrecked严重毁坏的
duke公爵停了 7 秒才出来
towline拖绳像 tower nine
adore爱慕；崇拜
sermon布道像 thorma
swamp沼泽
alcohol酒；酒精
preacher传教士像 fraser
sinner罪人像 singer
circus马戏团
wharf码头像 wow ruff，念了两下
mattress床垫像 matrix
tattoo纹身先出来 toe
initials姓名首字母
inn小旅馆
crook骗子
plantation种植园
shed小棚屋
disagreement分歧先出来 this agreement
adopt收养

单词表是单独录的一段，不算进上面课文的数。bracelet、wrecked、initials 这次都念准了；disagreement 连着三次都是先出 this / the。灰虚线那几个听着像另一个词，点开听一下她念的是不是对的。

🪄 画好斜线的版本

Jim believed in old-fashioned ways / to save himself / from a snake's poison.

📍 三把尺子上的位置

准确率 · Fountas & Pinnell 分档

92.4% 落在「偏难」这一档 —— 比 10/23（95.3%）往左挪了一截。291 个词错 22 处，每一处都是听过录音确认的。

每分钟正确词数 · Hasbrouck & Tindal 2017 秋季常模

72 个正确词/分钟：比 10/23（75）慢了 3，落在三年级秋季 25 百分位（59）和 50 百分位（83）之间。母语常模只当参照系，不是及格线。

断句语调 · NAEP 朗读流利度 4 级

4整句成组读，有语调、有表情

3三四个词一组，断句基本合在意思上

2两个词一组，偶尔三四个，还没什么语调在这里

1一个词一个词往外蹦

平均 3.2 个词一组，比 10/23（3.0）又成串了一点；回读六处，按第 2 级放着。

📐 分数是怎么来的

准确率 92.4%（读对 269 / 划线共 291 词）。替换、漏读、读错音计错；插入的词和退回去重读只算不流利、不计错。上面的比对列了 21 条、计错 22 处（bad luck 一条两处），每一处都是听过录音确认的。

每分钟正确词数 72（WCPM）= 读对的 269 个词 ÷ 223.0 秒 × 60。录音开头、结尾和翻页那一下都不算进来。

断句取停顿里断在句子中间的那些，平均 3.2 个词一组。

录音是手机拍的点读视频，230.4 秒，读的是第 16–17 页划线的七段（291 词）；单词表另录了一段 77 秒，单独评，不在上面这些数里；停顿按「说话声级 − 10 dB、持续 ≥0.25 秒」数。读错的地方都一处一处听过录音。

课文蓝思约 850L 是估算，不是官方值：按蓝思公开的公式，用句子长短和生词多少来算，拿四本有官方值的英文原著校准过，整本书上误差约 50L。一次只读一两百个词，误差还会更大 —— 用来看这次比上次难还是易，别看个位数。