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2026 年 10 月 8 日

超8 · Lesson 6 ·《绿野仙踪》· 1 次朗读

1 次 · 2 页 218 词 93.1%−6.9 每分钟 72 词−10 3 分钟 👂 盲听过 ⚠️ 有划线没读 · 12 词

第 7–8 页

划线两段 · 跳过了一行 218 词 · 课文约 930L · 👂⁠ ⁠家⁠长⁠盲⁠听⁠过⁠ ⁠3⁠8⁠ ⁠处

54/100

快了快一倍,有一整行跳过去了

准确度20/30
流利度14/30
断句语调13/25
发音7/15

四项加起来 100 分:准确度 30 · 流利度 30 · 断句语调 25 · 发音 15。上一次 41 分。

⚠️ 有划线没读

第 8 页第 6 行(跳过了一整行)12 个词“pleats flowing from her shoulders. Sparkling stars were sprinkled over her gown,”

这 12 个词没读,不算进分数 —— 上面的分数只算读了的 218 个词。

✏️ 下次读之前

🐎田忌法换个顺序行不行?

这几个词先念熟,再读句子

pe·cu·liar奇特的hats帽子wore穿着dia·monds钻石

卡住:上次 6 次 → 这次 4 次

📊 四个数字

93.1%读对 203/218 词
72每分钟正确词数
170秒读完全段
65次停顿

↗️ 和 9/14 读同样这两页比

准确率85.2% → 93.1%+7.9
正确词/分38 → 72+34
几个词一停1.3 → 3.4 词+2.1
停顿占时长36% → 23%−13
课文蓝思930L → 930L持平

同一段课文、同一部手机录的视频,隔了 24 天再读,速度和停顿可以直接比。准确率那一行不全是进步:9/14 的错是从转写判的,这次是一处一处听过录音定的,跳过的那一行也不算了。

📝 细说

同样这两页,9/14 读过一次。这次每分钟读对的词从 38 涨到 72,读了的 218 个词错 15 处。分开看:

  • 快了,是因为上次卡住的词这次大多过去了 —— tremble 一次读对(上次试了三遍)、undoubtedly 读出来了(上次只出来一个音);卡住的地方从 6 处降到 4 处,最长的一处从 23 秒降到 13 秒
  • 第 8 页跳过了一整行 —— with 读完直接接上了下下行的 shimmering,中间不到 1 秒。那一行 12 个词不算进分数
  • wore 两次都看成了 were —— 第 8 页描写衣着那几句错得最多:wore、bells、sound、outfits、hats、diamonds
  • peculiar 还是没过去 —— 先读成 particular,停了 9 秒,又试了半个音

🌟 读得好的地方

the house to tremble violently. Losing her balance,

原文朗读
这次读的

the woman was undoubtedly much older

原文朗读
这次读的

Dorothy managed to grab Toto and followed her aunt.

原文朗读
这次读的

同样两页,用时少了快一半

上次 tremble 试了三遍都没出来,这次一口气读对。上次只读出来一个音、卡了 7 秒,这次读出来了。这一句 5 秒读完,中间没停。上次课文段读了 312 秒,这次 170 秒左右。

⏱ 这 241 秒长什么样

念生词表 翻页 0s 20s 40s 60s 80s 100s 120s 140s 160s 180s 200s 220s 240s ① ② ③ ④
在读 句末停顿 · 14 次 句中长停 ≥0.8 秒 · 6 次 句中短停 · 45 次
  1. ①

    gust of wind roared causing

    5.3 秒读成 roar,往下读了半句又退回 causing 重来一遍

    💭 roar 后面还跟着两个字母,风是现在在吼,还是已经吼过了?

  2. ②

    losing her balance Dorothy

    3.2 秒读完 balance 停住,又把 balance 念了一遍才接上 Dorothy

    💭 balance 后面是逗号还是句号?逗号后面的 Dorothy 在干什么?

  3. ③

    dressed in peculiar attire

    13.3 秒先读成 particular,停了 9 秒,又试出半个音

    💭 particular 是 par 开头,这个词开头是哪两个字母?

  4. ④

    the woman was undoubtedly

    3.2 秒读出来之后又拆成几截重念了一遍

    💭 中间藏着一个你认识的词 doubt,前面加上 un- 是什么意思?

开头 53 秒念的是第 4–6 页的生词。第 8 页最后一句话断在「her face」,后半截印在第 9 页、这次没划线,她照着句子读到句号才停。这两段都不算进上面那些数。

另外这几段也不是在读,一并扣掉了:翻页 4.6 秒。

📄 这次读了 2 页

第 7 页53.5-141.8 秒 · 121 词 · 候选错 17 处 · 多读 29 处 · 语速 82 词/分
第 8 页146.5-228.0 秒 · 109 词 · 候选错 33 处 · 多读 13 处 · 语速 80 词/分

第 8 页错得多:第 7 页 121 词错 4 处,第 8 页读了的 97 词错 11 处(跳过的那一行 12 个词不算),多半落在描写衣着的那几句(peculiar、wore、bells、sound、outfits、hats、diamonds)。

🔍 逐字比对 · 15 处

点词听读音 · 绿是这个词的标准音 · 红是她读的那一句

原文On this particular day, Uncle Henry sat on the doorstep, his gaze1 fixed anxiously upon the unusually2 gray sky. Aunt Em was busy washing the dishes. Suddenly, Uncle Henry stood up and called out to his wife, "Em, there's a cyclone coming! I'll go check on the livestock." With that, he hurried toward the sheds3 where the cows and horses were kept. 实读On this particular day, Uncle Henry sat on the doorstep, his gas1 fixed anxiously upon the unusual2 gray sky. Aunt Em was busy washing the dishes. Suddenly, Uncle Henry stood up and called out to his wife, "Em, there's a cyclone coming! I'll go check on the livestock." With that, he hurried toward the shells3 where the cows and horses were kept.
目标62 个词全对、40 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
9/14 读的
  1. 161.0 秒。gaze 末尾的 z 读成了 s
  2. 265.6 秒。unusually 少了 -ly
  3. 386.9 秒。sheds 看成了 shells
原文Aunt Em stopped her work and rushed to the door. A single glance showed there was danger. "Quick, Dorothy!" she screamed. "Run to the cellar!" Dorothy managed to grab Toto and followed her aunt. However, halfway across the room, a fierce gust of wind roared, causing the house to tremble violently. Losing her balance, Dorothy tumbled4 to the floor. 实读Aunt Em stopped her work and rushed to the door. A single glance showed there was danger. "Quick, Dorothy!" she screamed. "Run to the cellar!" Dorothy managed to grab Toto and followed her aunt. However, halfway across the room, a fierce gust of wind roared, causing the house to tremble violently. Losing her balance, Dorothy tumble4 to the floor.
目标59 个词全对、38 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
9/14 读的
  1. 4139.1 秒。tumbled 少了 -d
原文Some very strange people that she had? never seen before were coming toward her. Three were men, and one was a woman, all dressed in peculiar5 attire. They wore6 hats with bells7 on them that made a sweet tinkling sound8 when they moved. The men wore9 blue outfits10 that matched their hats11, and their shiny boots had a deep blue cuff. The woman had a white hat and a long dress with pleats flowing from her shoulders. Sparkling stars were sprinkled over her gown, shimmering like diamonds12 in the sunlight. While13 the bearded men appeared to be14 about Uncle Henry's age, the woman was undoubtedly much older: her face 实读Some very strange people that she has? never seen before were coming toward her. Three were men, and one was a woman, all dressed in particular5 attire. They were6 hats with bears7 on them that made a sweet tinkling sun8 when they moved. The men were9 blue out feet10 that matched their heads11, and their shiny boots had a deep blue cuff. The woman had a white hat and a long dress with pleats flowing from her shoulders. Sparkling stars were sprinkled over her gown, shimmering like damage12 in the sunlight. where13 the bearded men appeared to (漏读)14 about Uncle Henry's age, the woman was undoubtedly much older: her face
目标109 个词全对、70 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
9/14 读的
  1. ?149.2 秒。听着像 has,没听太清,想核就听 148–150 秒
  2. 5159.6 秒。peculiar 先读成 particular,停了 9 秒又试出半个音,没出来
  3. 6173.7 秒。wore 看成了 were
  4. 7177.2 秒。bells 的 l 读成了 r
  5. 8183.2 秒。sound 读成了 sun
  6. 9186.8 秒。wore 第二次看成了 were
  7. 10188.3 秒。outfits 拆成 out / feet 两截,后半截没读对
  8. 11191.3 秒。hats 读成了 heads —— 上次是 head,同一个错
  9. 12206.2 秒。diamonds 看成了 damage
  10. 13208.9 秒。While 看成了 where
  11. 14212.5 秒。be 跳过去了

🌀 读了两遍才接上的地方 · 5 处

roar causing the host to causing the house to tremble

balance balance Dorothy tumbled to

particular pickle peculiar attire They wore

the their hats and their

that the live a much older her face

123.6 秒。读到 to 发现不对,退回 causing 又读了一遍134.9 秒。balance 后面停住,又念了一遍才接上159.6 秒。peculiar 先读成 particular,9 秒后又试了半个音190.1 秒。the 起头,马上改成 their 221.1 秒。undoubtedly 读出来之后又拆成几截重念了一遍

🪄 画好斜线的版本

Some very strange people / that she had never seen before / were coming toward her.

📍 三把尺子上的位置

准确率 · Fountas & Pinnell 分档

偏难 要带一带 能自己读 95% 98% 上一页 85.2% 本页 93.1%

93.1% 落在「偏难」这一档。9/14 读同样两页是 85.2%,但那次的错是从转写判的,这次是一处一处听过录音定的,两个数不是同一种判法。

每分钟正确词数 · Hasbrouck & Tindal 2017 秋季常模

二年级 三年级 四年级 五年级 本页 72 0 50 100 150 WCPM 中间一半 · 25–75 百分位 一半人在这条线上 · 50 百分位

72 个正确词/分钟:比 9/14(38)快了 34,落在三年级秋季 25 百分位(59)和 50 百分位(83)之间。母语常模只当参照系,不是及格线。

断句语调 · NAEP 朗读流利度 4 级

4整句成组读,有语调、有表情
3三四个词一组,断句基本合在意思上
2两个词一组,偶尔三四个,还没什么语调在这里
1一个词一个词往外蹦

平均 3.5 个词一组,9/14 是 1.3 —— 停顿从 171 次降到 65 次,停顿占时长从 36% 降到 23%。losing her balance, / Dorothy 这类逗号处停住重来的还有,仍按第 2 级放着。

📐 分数是怎么来的

准确率 93.1%(读对 203 / 读了的 218 词)。第 8 页跳过的那一行 12 个词不算进分数;替换、漏读、读错音计错;插入的词和退回去重读只算不流利、不计错。上面的比对列了 15 条、计错 15 处,都是听过录音定的,其中 had 那一处听不太清也算了错。

每分钟正确词数 72(WCPM)= 读对的 203 个词 ÷ 169.8 秒 × 60。开头念生词表的 53 秒、末尾第 9 页那半句话、翻页和录完之后那几秒,都不算进来。

断句取 65 次停顿里断在句子中间的那些,平均 3.5 个词一组。

录音是手机拍的点读视频,240.6 秒;停顿按「说话声级 − 10 dB、持续 ≥0.25 秒」数;比对基准是第 7、8 页划线框住的那两段(230 词,跳过的那一行不算)。读错的地方都一处一处听过录音。

课文蓝思约 930L 是估算,不是官方值:按蓝思公开的公式,用句子长短和生词多少来算,拿四本有官方值的英文原著校准过,整本书上误差约 50L。一次只读一两百个词,误差还会更大 —— 用来看这次比上次难还是易,别看个位数。

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