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2026 年 9 月 3 日

超8 · Lesson 4 ·《Heidi》· 1 次朗读

1 次 · 4 页 472 词 89.6%−1.8 每分钟 48 词−13 9 分钟

第 12–15 页

划线部分 472 词 · 课文约 800L

46／100

一口气读了 472 个词，是上一次的 2.4 倍，中间有 37 个词连成一串一处没错。
准确度17/30
流利度11/30
断句语调11/25
发音7/15

四项加起来 100 分：准确度 30 · 流利度 30 · 断句语调 25 · 发音 15。上一次 50 分。

✏️ 下次试试这三件事

🏠

hut 的元音：hut / heart / hot 摆一排念

49 处错里 hut 一个词占 3 处 —— 这个词在这四页出现四次，三次读成了 heart。hut 是短促的 /ʌ/，heart 是拉长的 /ɑː/ —— 挨着念听中间那个音长不长。第一册第 6–8 页就栽过这个词，隔了一册还是这个音，说明还没改过来。bound 读成 bond、liked 读成 lacked、saw 读成 so、see 读成 say 都是同一族。
🔚

词尾那三个音：-ing / -ed / -s

7 处丢在词尾：bringing 读成 bring、refused 读成 refuse、answered 读成 answer、became 读成 become、needs 读成 need、visited 读成 visits、built 读成 builds。这些词她都认得，是读到句尾松了口气。每句最后一个词多含半拍再往下读。
🎬

生词表和课文分成两段录

这次的视频里，课文读完之后还念了 113 秒的生词表。这段算进总时长、不算进课文的正确词数，所以报告头上的「每分钟 39 词」「1.2 个词一停」比她实际读的慢。分成两段录，这两个数就能直接和下次比了。

📊 四个数字

89.6%读对 423/472 词
48每分钟正确词数
529秒读完全段
305次停顿

↗️ 和上一页比

准确率91.4% → 89.6%−1.8
正确词/分61 → 48−13
几个词一停2.0 → 1.5 词−0.5
停顿占时长33% → 37%+4
课文蓝思920L → 800L易了 120L

准确率 = 降了 1.8正确词/分 = 慢了 9 个几个词一停 = 碎了一些停顿占时长 = 多了一点四项里三项往下走：91.4% → 89.6%、61 → 48 个正确词/分、2.0 → 1.5 个词一组。这次 472 个词，是上一次的 2.4 倍，一口气读了 9 分 0 秒。末尾那 117 秒念的是生词表，不算进这几个数。

📝 细说

读对 423 个，准确率 89.6%（上一次 91.4%），分数 46（上一次 50）。

  • 篇幅是上一次的 2.4 倍 —— 472 个词一口气读了 9 分 0 秒；人名地名是德语（Sesemann、Rottenmeier、Sebastian、Dorfli），句子也比前面长
  • 真正要练的还是元音 —— 49 处错里 12 处是长音读成了短音，hut 出现四次、有三次读成了 heart（第一册第 6–8 页就栽过同一个词）；saw 读成 so、see 读成 say、liked 读成 lacked、bound 读成 bond，都是同一族
  • 231 到 261 秒那 37 个词一处没错 —— 从 “once-in-a-lifetime opportunity” 一路读到“stormed out of the hut”，74 个词一分钟。她能读成串，只是还不能一直保持

🌟 读得好的地方

……“a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity! Heidi will become the girl's best friend, and they could play and study together. Isn't that awesome?” “Take her away and never bring her back!” Then the old man stormed out of the hut. —— 231 到 261 秒这 37 个词一口气读完，一处没错，每分钟 74 个词，中间最长的间隔只有 2.9 秒（还是两句之间）。前九次最长的连贯段是 11 个词。

这次读的

Uncle Alp greeted him as politely as he could. “Morning, Pastor. Please have a seat.” —— 94 到 110 秒，20 个词、78 词/分，Alp 这个名字和 politely 都一次读对。

这次读的

“Good lord! What kind of girl your age doesn't read?” she said. —— 411 秒起这一句读出了语气，后面接 “Heidi, you may have some time to do what you please” 一路没断。

这次读的

“about the safety of Heidi's travel to school and back in winter. Later that day, a second visitor appeared to make the……” —— 179 到 200 秒，22 个词跨着两句读完、一处没错，safety 和 travel 都干净。

这次读的

第 12 页那个 “Good morning” —— 课本只印了 “Morning”，她自己补全了。

⏱ 这 657 秒长什么样

念生词表 0s 60s 120s 180s 240s 300s 360s 420s 480s 540s 600s 卡 9.2 秒 退回去重读 7.4 秒 退回去重读 7.2 秒 卡在 once-in-a-lifetime 上 10.0 秒 念生词表 113.2 秒
在读 句末停顿 · 44 次 句中长停 ≥0.8 秒 · 59 次 句中短停 · 202 次

五处长停只有第一处和第四处是真卡在词上：48 秒那处是 “to fix things.” 读完之后要跳过Chapter 4 的标题才接得上下一段，221 秒卡在 once-in-a-lifetime 这个连字符长词上，10 秒里拆成「once in our life time」才读出来。69 秒和 163.9 秒是退回去重来。

课文读到 “No problems!” 就完了（540 秒），后面那 117 秒念的是第 3–5 页那 22 个生词。221–231 秒卡在 once-in-a-lifetime 上的那 10 秒不跳 —— 那是朗读的一部分。四个数字都不算生词表那段（图上灰底的就是它）。

另外这几段也不是在读，一并扣掉了：还没开口 0.6 秒、翻页 1.0 秒、翻页 5.6 秒、翻页 4.0 秒。

📄 这次读了 4 页

第 12 页1.8-109.7 秒 · 97 词 · 计错 15 处 · 语速 46 词/分
第 13 页110.7-261.2 秒 · 129 词 · 计错 9 处 · 语速 51 词/分（已扣掉卡壳那 10.0 秒）
第 14 页266.8-420.5 秒 · 118 词 · 计错 10 处 · 语速 42 词/分
第 15 页424.6-653.3 秒 · 128 词 · 计错 15 处 · 语速 59 词/分（已扣掉念生词表那 113.2 秒）

第 12 页最吃力：97 个词错 15 处，开头那半分钟几乎每句都有磕碰（blind、noticed、built、their、hut 连着来），hut → heart 三次里有两次在这一页。第 13 页反而最稳 —— 那一页对话多、句子短，129 个词只错 9 处。第 15 页错得和第 12 页一样多，但语速最快，是读到后面赶起来了。

🔍 逐字比对 · 机器候选 100 处 · 逐条核完计错 49 处

点词听读音 · 绿是这个词的标准音 · 红是她读的那一句

原文Meanwhile, Heidi learnt? that Grannie? was blind1 and noticed? how poorly built2 their3 hut4 was. "I will ask Grandfather to fix the hut5," she6 promised. 实读Meanwhile, Heidi learned? that granny? was planned1 and taste? how poorly builds2 the3 heart4 was. "I will ask Grandfather to fix the heart5," he6 promised.
目标25 个词全对、16 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. ?2.5 秒。课本用英式 learnt，识别器只会往 learned 上写。同一个词，不计错
  2. ?4.2 秒。课本把奶奶拼成 Grannie，识别器写 granny —— 完全同音，不计错
  3. 15.3 秒。blind 读成了 planned，开头那个 b 变成了 pl
  4. ?7.0 秒。转写把 noticed 切成了「not + taste」两个词，多出来的那个 not 就是证据。不计错
  5. 212.6 秒。built 读成 builds，多了个词尾 -s
  6. 313.7 秒。their 读成了 the
  7. 413.9 秒。hut 读成 heart —— 这段录音里 hut 出现四次，有三次都读成了这个音
  8. 522.1 秒。hut 读成 heart，第二次
  9. 623.0 秒。she 读成 he，一句在讲 Heidi，主语换了人
原文The next day, Heidi? kept her promise by bringing7 Grandfather to Grannie's? hut8 to fix things9. 实读The next day, he? kept her promise by bring7 Grandfather to granny's? heart8 to fix sing9.
目标16 个词全对、10 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. ?32.8 秒。专名。Heidi 这个名字在这段录音里认对过 5 次，识别器是在把它切成两个词。不计错
  2. 741.8 秒。少了词尾 -ing
  3. ?44.3 秒。同音，不计错
  4. 845.2 秒。hut 读成 heart，第三次。同一个词同一个音，三次都一样
  5. 947.2 秒。things 读成 sing —— th 读成了 s
原文Heidi had10 spent a winter and11 a12 summer with Uncle Alp?. When her second winter on the mountain was about to end, a? man13 in black visited14 them. It was the pastor from Dorfli?. Although surprised15 to see him, Uncle Alp greeted him as politely as he could. "Morning, Pastor. Please have a seat." The pastor refused16 the offer; instead, he told Uncle Alp? straight17 away why he was there to convince18 him to send19 Heidi? to school. 实读Heidi has10 spent a winter on11 the12 summer with Uncle al?. When her second winter on the mountain was about to end, （漏读）? the13 in black visits14 them. It was the pastor from dorflay?. Although pressed15 to see him, Uncle Alp greeted him as politely as he could. "Morning, Pastor. Please have a seat." The pastor refuse16 the offer; instead, he told Uncle elp? street17 away why he was there to convenience18 him to spend19 handy? to school.
目标78 个词全对、50 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. 1057.2 秒。had 读成 has，时态读串了
  2. 1159.9 秒。and 读成 on
  3. 1260.5 秒。a 读成 the
  4. ?62.2 秒。专名，识别器拼不出 Alp。不计错
  5. ?和下一条是同一处（她读的是「the … in black」），只算一处
  6. 1382.3 秒。a man 没读出来，只读了一个 the
  7. 1485.0 秒。visited 读成 visits，过去式读成了现在式
  8. ?90.0 秒。地名，识别器拼不出 Dorfli。不计错
  9. 1593.1 秒。surprised 前半个音节吞掉了，只出来 pressed
  10. 16109.7 秒。少了词尾 -d
  11. ?117.9 秒。专名。不计错
  12. 17118.4 秒。straight 读成 street，双元音 /eɪ/ 读成了长音 /iː/
  13. 18123.7 秒。convince 读成了 convenience，是另一个词
  14. 19132.6 秒。send 读成 spend，中间多了个 /p/
  15. ?133.0 秒。专名。不计错
原文Uncle Alp? shook20 his head on21 the? suggestion?. "Heidi? doesn't need to go to school. She's fine here." He also expressed worries22 about the safety of Heidi's? travel to school and back in winter. 实读Uncle out? shroke20 his head and21 suggestion? hey?. "this? doesn't need to go to school. She's fine here." He also expressed varies22 about the safety of hiding? travel to school and back in winter.
目标34 个词全对、22 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. ?141.2 秒。专名。不计错
  2. 20142.1 秒。shook 读成 shroke，中间多了个 r
  3. 21143.3 秒。on 读成 and
  4. ?147.1 秒。对齐错位 —— suggestion 在下一条出现了，说明她读出来了。不计错
  5. ?150.1 秒。同上，一处错位拆成了两条。不计错
  6. ?153.1 秒。专名。不计错
  7. 22178.0 秒。worries 读成 varies —— w 读成了 v
  8. ?182.8 秒。专名。不计错
原文Later that? day?, a second visitor appeared to make the already23 angry Grandfather even more so Detie? was back and wanted to take Heidi? to Frankfurt to live in a family24 with a disabled girl. "It's a? once-in-a-lifetime? opportunity! Heidi will become the girl's best friend, and they could play and study together. Isn't that awesome?" 实读Later that's? they?, a second visitor appeared to make the alrighty23 angry Grandfather even more so he? was back and wanted to take haddy? to Frankfurt to live in a friendly24 with a disabled girl. "It's uh? pro? opportunity! Heidi will become the girl's best friend, and they could play and study together. Isn't that awesome?"
目标56 个词全对、36 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. ?191.3 秒。转写把「that day」整个糊成了「that's they」。不计错
  2. ?191.6 秒。同上。day 这个词在第 12 页认对过。不计错
  3. 23199.8 秒。already 读成 alrighty，重音后那个音节读岔了
  4. ?205.7 秒。专名。和上一册一样，识别器把 Detie 切成两个词。不计错
  5. ?210.6 秒。专名。不计错
  6. 24216.5 秒。family 读成 friendly，是另一个词
  7. ?229.1 秒。那 10 秒卡顿里的一声「呃」，不是读错。不计错
  8. ?231.2 秒。她把连字符那个词拆开读成了「once in our life time」 —— 读出来了，只是拆着读。不计错
原文Detie? took Heidi? to the Sesemanns?, a very wealthy family in Frankfurt. Mr. Sesemann? was often away working, so he hired25 Miss Rottenmeier? to look after26 his wheelchair-bound27 daughter Clara. Since28 the girl's? mother? died a long time ago, Mr. Sesemann? thought29 Clara's happiness was his? most? important thing. 实读he? took the? to the （漏读）?, a very wealthy family in Frankfurt. Mr. assessment? was often away working, so he heard25 Miss mayor? to look for26 his bond27 daughter Clara. sends28 the girl? smother? died a long time ago, Mr. sesmire? brought29 Clara's happiness was almost? impor-? important thing.
目标49 个词全对、31 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. ?266.4 秒。专名。不计错
  2. ?268.3 秒。专名。不计错
  3. ?德语姓氏，识别器拼不出。不计错
  4. ?282.5 秒。同上。不计错
  5. 25295.1 秒。hired 读成 heard，双元音 /aɪ/ 丢了
  6. ?298.6 秒。转写切成了「rotten + mayor」两个词 —— 多出来的 rotten 就是她读对了的证据。不计错
  7. 26301.9 秒。after 读成 for
  8. 27303.9 秒。wheelchair 读对了（在多读里），bound 读成 bond —— 又是长音读成短音
  9. 28312.5 秒。Since 读成 sends，而且退回去重读的第二遍还是 sends
  10. ?313.4 秒。那个 's 跑到了下一个词前面（识别成「girl smother」），一处错位拆成了两条。不计错
  11. ?314.0 秒。同上。不计错
  12. ?323.9 秒。专名。不计错
  13. 29325.3 秒。thought 读成 brought —— th 读成了 br
  14. ?332.3 秒。转写把「his most」糊成了 almost，多出来的那个 he 就是 his。不计错
  15. ?333.5 秒。紧接着 important 就出来了，说明她读的是「most important」。不计错
原文Miss? Rottenmeier? liked30 bossing31 servants around in32 the house. She was not friendly. When she saw33 Heidi?, she asked her about her name and age, but neither of which satisfied her. "Heidi is not a proper name," and "You are not Clara's? age?," were? her words. When she learnt? that Heidi? couldn't read, she became34 very surprised. "Good lord! What kind of girl your age doesn't read?" she said. 实读ms? rottenmer? lacked30 both31 servants around （漏读）32 the house. She was not friendly. When she so33 hiding?, she asked her about her name and age, but neither of which satisfied her. "Heidi is not a proper name," and "You are not you? with?," her? her words. When she learned? that you? couldn't read, she become34 very surprised. "Good lord! What kind of girl your age doesn't read?" she said.
目标69 个词全对、44 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. ?337.6 秒。Miss 和 Ms 完全同音。不计错
  2. ?341.3 秒。rottenmer 就是她读对了、识别器拼不出这个德语姓。不计错
  3. 30342.2 秒。liked 读成 lacked，元音又短了
  4. 31342.9 秒。bossing 只读出前半，成了 both
  5. 32整个词跳过去了
  6. 33361.1 秒。saw 读成 so
  7. ?361.3 秒。专名。不计错
  8. ?398.2 秒。转写里 Clara 在 393.7 秒就出来了，说明她读出来了。不计错
  9. ?399.5 秒。这三秒转写整片糊（把握 0.07–0.40），age 在前面认对过。不计错
  10. ?400.6 秒。同上。不计错
  11. ?404.2 秒。同第一条，英式拼法。不计错
  12. ?406.1 秒。专名。不计错
  13. 34408.5 秒。became 读成 become，过去式读成了原形
原文"Heidi?, you may have some time to do what you please as Clara needs35 to rest in the afternoon," said? Miss? Rottenmeier?. Heidi was dying to see36 something green. She chose to go out to climb up to37 the church tower bell as38 Sebastian? suggested. Since she was39 new? to Frankfurt, she had to ask for directions from a boy on her way. "You must pay me if I40 lead41 you42 there," the boy said. 实读"had?, you may have some time to do what you please as Clara need35 to rest in the afternoon," the? ms? ratmere?. Heidi was dying to say36 something green. She chose to go out to climb up （漏读）37 the church tower bell best38 gym? suggested. Since she （漏读）39 knew? to Frankfurt, she had to ask for directions from a boy on her way. "You must pay me if you40 like41 me42 there," the boy said.
目标75 个词全对、48 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. ?420.6 秒。专名。不计错
  2. 35432.5 秒。少了词尾 -s
  3. ?435.6 秒。said 在这段录音里认对过三次。不计错
  4. ?438.1 秒。同音。不计错
  5. ?440.9 秒。专名。不计错
  6. 36447.4 秒。see 读成 say
  7. 37整个词跳过去了
  8. 38459.7 秒。as 读成 best
  9. ?460.3 秒。专名，Sebastian 认对过一次。不计错
  10. 39整个词跳过去了
  11. ?465.5 秒。new 和 knew 完全同音。不计错
  12. 40480.5 秒。这半句人称整个读反了：「if I lead you there」读成了「if you … me there」
  13. 41481.0 秒。lead 读成 like
  14. 42481.5 秒。同 85，人称读反
原文"Fine," Heidi? answered43. "Go ask for money from Clara tomorrow." 实读"Fine," the? answer43. "Go ask for money from Clara tomorrow."
目标10 个词全对、6 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. ?487.9 秒。转写把 Heidi 切成了「had + the」。不计错
  2. 43488.2 秒。少了词尾 -ed
原文Miss? Rottenmeier? into a panic as she was afraid of cats. "Get44 rid of those nasty little cats, Sebastian!" she hurried out of the room while45 screaming the order46. 实读ms? rosemary? into a panic as she was afraid of cats. "got44 rid of those nasty little cats, Sebastian!" she hurried out of the room well45 screaming the other46.
目标29 个词全对、19 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. ?497.6 秒。同音。不计错
  2. ?499.7 秒。专名。不计错
  3. 44508.4 秒。Get 读成 got
  4. 45519.5 秒。while 读成 well
  5. 46521.6 秒。order 读成 other，中间那个 d 丢了
原文"Sebastian?, please, help us hide47 the kittens," pleaded48 Clara?. 实读"spectrum?, please, help us have47 the kittens," play48 the?.
目标9 个词全对、6 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. ?522.7 秒。专名。不计错
  2. 47527.3 秒。hide 读成 have
  3. 48531.7 秒。pleaded 只读出前半，成了 play
  4. ?535.3 秒。专名，Clara 认对过三次。不计错
原文"Take49 it easy. No problems?!" 实读"heck49 it easy. No reward?!"
目标5 个词全对、3 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. 49538.2 秒。Take 没读出来
  2. ?650.2 秒。录音末尾 113 秒念的是生词表，reward 是那 22 个词里的最后一个 —— 被对齐拉去顶了课文结尾的 problems。她读了 problems（转写里是 problem）。不计错

🌀 退回去重来、多读了词的地方 · 8 处

and bring grandfather to by bringing Grandfather to

winter on the winter on the mountain

good morning Morning, Pastor. Please have

send to school and go Alp shook his head

appeared appeared to make the

it um once in our life time a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity! Heidi

sends the girls Since the girl's mother

problem we didn't see responsibility grumpy carpenter familiar pastor stubborn awesome begger borrow barrel organ innocent sob crank rumor rib appearance jealous recovered reward problems

36.6 秒。“by bringing Grandfather to Grannie's hut” 起了个头没接顺，退回去从 “and bring grandfather to” 重来一遍。69.0 秒。“winter on the” 三个词读了两遍才接上 “mountain”。101.6 秒。课本印的是 “Morning, Pastor.”，她读成了 “Good morning, Pastor.” —— 多读的词不计错，而且这一句读得又稳又清楚。137.9 秒。上一句的 “to send Heidi to school” 拖到了下一句前面，重来了一遍。195.4 秒。同一个词读了两遍。221.5 秒。卡在 once-in-a-lifetime 这个连字符长词上 10 秒，最后拆成四个词读了出来 —— 读对了，只是拆着读。307.9 秒。“Since the girl's” 读了两遍，两遍开头都读成了 sends。540.1 秒起。课文读完之后念的是第 3–5 页那 22 个生词，不是课文的一部分。

🪄 画好斜线的版本

When she saw Heidi, / she asked her / about her name and age, / but neither of which / satisfied her.

📍 三把尺子上的位置

准确率 · Fountas & Pinnell 分档

偏难 要带一带 能自己读 95% 98% 上一页 91.4% 本页 89.6%

89.6% 落在「偏难」这一档 —— 比上一次（91.4%）往左挪了一点点。472 个词错 49 处；这次读的量是上一次的 2.4 倍，段落越长越容易掉链子。

每分钟正确词数 · Hasbrouck & Tindal 2017 秋季常模

二年级 三年级 四年级 五年级 本页 48 0 50 100 150 WCPM 中间一半 · 25–75 百分位 一半人在这条线上 · 50 百分位

48 个正确词/分钟，比上一次（61）慢了 13 个，压在三年级秋季 10–25 百分位上。录音末尾那 117 秒念的是生词表，不算进这个数、也不算进时长。母语常模只当参照系，不是及格线。

断句语调 · NAEP 朗读流利度 4 级

4整句成组读，有语调、有表情
3三四个词一组，断句基本合在意思上
2两个词一组，偶尔三四个，还没什么语调在这里
1一个词一个词往外蹦

平均 1.5 个词一组，比上一次的 1.8 碎了一些。

📐 分数是怎么来的

准确率 89.6%（读对 423 / 划线部分共 472 词）。替换、漏读、读错音计错；插入的词和退回去重读只算不流利、不计错。上面的比对列了 100 条候选、计错 49 处 —— 撤下的 51 条里，24 条是人名地名（Heidi、Alp、Detie、Sesemann、Rottenmeier、Sebastian、Dorfli、Clara），这几页是德语姓氏最密的一段，识别器拼不出来只会往认识的词上靠；7 条是转写把一个词切成了两个（noticed 切成 not + taste、Rottenmeier 切成 rotten + mayor、his most 糊成 almost），多出来的那半个词就是她读对了的证据；6 条是完全同音（Grannie/granny、Miss/Ms、new/knew）。

每分钟正确词数 48（WCPM）= 读对的 423 词 ÷ 529.1 秒 × 60。录音一共 10 分 57 秒，末尾 117 秒念的是第 3–5 页那 22 个生词，不是这次要评的朗读 —— 那 117 秒不算进时长，图上灰底的就是它。221–231 秒卡在 once-in-a-lifetime 上的那 10 秒照算，那是朗读的一部分。

断句取 305 次停顿（生词表那段的不算），平均 1.5 个词一组。停顿阈值取「说话声级 − 10 dB」，和前面九次同一把尺子。

这次是 9 月 3 日的录音，第 12–15 页的划线部分一口气读完，是第二本《Heidi》的第三次，也是十一次里最长的一份。发音这一项没有一个音一个音地听过，是从录音里推出来的，不如亲耳听准，所以这一项的分给得保守。

课文蓝思约 800L 是估算，不是官方值：按蓝思公开的公式，用句子长短和生词多少来算，拿四本有官方值的英文原著校准过，整本书上误差约 50L。一次只读一两百个词，误差还会更大 —— 用来看这次比上次难还是易，别看个位数。

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