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2026 年 8 月 28 日

超8 · Lesson 3 ·《Prince Darling》· 1 次朗读

1 次 · 3 页 349 词 92.3%+1.0 每分钟 59 词+8 5 分钟

第 70–72 页

划线部分 349 词 · 课文约 1210L

52/100

三页一口气读下来,越往后越赶。

准确度19/30
流利度13/30
断句语调12/25
发音8/15

四项加起来 100 分:准确度 30 · 流利度 30 · 断句语调 25 · 发音 15。上一次 45 分。

✏️ 下次试试这三件事

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长词先拆音节:cruel / criminal / greediness / rudeness / Thinking

27 处里 12 处栽在这类词上 —— 音节多、读到跟前才发现不会。开读之前先把划线里超过两个音节的词圈出来,拆开念一遍(cru-el、cri-mi-nal、gree-di-ness)。

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形近的词看清楚再读:form / from、fell / felt、lake / like、were / are

这四对都只差一两个字母,眼睛扫过去很容易认成另一个。手指点到哪读到哪,别让眼睛跑在前面。

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第三页别赶

第 70、71 页都是每分钟 60 个词,很稳;第 72 页快到了 74 个 —— 快了两成,错也从 7 处涨到 11 处,三处漏读全在这一页。三页连着读,读完第二页停一下再开始。

📊 四个数字

92.3%读对 322/349 词
59每分钟正确词数
329秒读完全段
186次停顿

↗️ 和上一页比

准确率89.0% → 92.3%回升了
正确词/分50 → 59快了
几个词一停1.7 → 1.9 词略成串
停顿占时长37% → 41%歇气更多了
课文蓝思920L → 1210L难了 290L

89.0% → 92.3%,回到 p68 那一档附近。两次的分母差很多:p69 只有 91 个词,一处错就是 1.1 个百分点,这次 349 个词、一处只占 0.29 —— 篇幅长本身就摊薄了错误率。下面两行也能直接比(8/30 起七次录音统一了停顿口径):1.9 个词一停(上次 1.7)、停顿占 41%(上次 37%)。断句和上一次差不多,但歇气占掉的时间多了 —— 349 个词读下来,喘的时间比读的时间只少一点。

📝 细说

349 个词、6 分 18 秒,篇幅是上一次(p69,91 词)的近四倍,准确率反而从 89.0% 回到 92.3%。

  • 越往后越赶 —— 按页拆开是一路往下的:94.5% → 92.8% → 88.7%,而第 72 页的语速比前两页还快了两成,不是读慢了读错,是读到第三页开始赶
  • 12 处是长实词没读出来 —— vowed / cruel / other / trial / criminal / lion / greediness / rudeness / Thinking / gotten / chains / prince
  • 6 处整词漏读 —— However / continued / all / away / back / only
  • 6 处是形近词和小词读串 —— form 读成 from、fell 读成 felt、lake 读成 like、were 读成 are、a 读成 the、vow 读成 wow
  • 3 处是词尾 —— escape 多了 -d、advisers 和 faults 少了 -s

🌟 读得好的地方

“He loved the prince as if he had been his own son and wished that he would always take the path of goodness.” —— 96 到 118 秒,27 个词一路读到底,一处没错,是三页里最长的一段干净朗读。

这次读的

“You ungratefully turned upon your tutor, who was like a second father to you.” —— ungratefully 这个五音节的词一次到位,整句 14 个词全对。

这次读的

“The prince, in great anger, ordered his foster-brother to bring Suliman back with a troop of soldiers.” —— 160 到 180 秒,除了名字全对,troop 和 soldiers 都读出来了。

这次读的

⏱ 这 379 秒长什么样

念生词表 0s 60s 120s 180s 240s 300s 360s 卡 5.3 秒 卡 5.8 秒 卡 5.7 秒 卡 4.3 秒 课文读完后念生词表 41.3 秒
在读 句末停顿 · 20 次 句中长停 ≥0.8 秒 · 31 次 句中短停 · 135 次

47.3–58.4 那 11 秒是两件事接在一起:escaped 读了两遍(都多了 -d),然后是段落切换 —— 原文这儿从叙述跳到 “When they heard Prince Darling's vow”。238.4–244.1 卡在 bull 上。328.0–332.3 是引号开头的新段(“Our prince, who took pleasure only in)。

课文读到 “took pleasure” 就完了(335 秒),后面那 43 秒念的是这一课的生词表。上面那张表里最后一条(335.1–376.4)就是它,不是卡壳。

另外这几段也不是在读,一并扣掉了:翻页 3.4 秒、翻页 3.1 秒。

📄 这次读了 3 页

第 70 页0.9-127.7 秒 · 127 词 · 计错 7 处 · 每分钟 60 词
第 71 页131.0-254.8 秒 · 125 词 · 计错 9 处 · 每分钟 61 词
第 72 页257.8-336.5 秒 · 97 词 · 计错 11 处 · 每分钟 74 词

第 72 页最吃力:词最少、错最多,语速却比前两页快了两成(这一页的秒数已经去掉末尾念生词表那 40 秒)。前两页每分钟都是 60 个词,很稳;到第三页快起来,形近词和漏读就都出来了 —— away、back、only 三处漏读全在这一页。

🔍 逐字比对 · 27 处

点词听读音 · 绿是这个词的标准音 · 红是她读的那一句

原文However1, when he reached the room in which Celia had been locked up, he was astonished to find that she was not in it, although he had had the key in his own pocket since he put her in the room. His anger was extreme, and he vowed2 that he would kill the people whoever had helped her escape3. 实读(漏读)1, when he reached the room in which Celia had been locked up, he was astonished to find that she was not in it, although he had had the key in his own pocket since he put her in the room. His anger was extreme, and he bold2 that he would kill the people whoever had helped her escaped3.
目标59 个词全对、38 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. 1开头第一个词整个跳过去了,直接从 when 读起
  2. 237.5 秒。vowed 读成 bold,开头的 v 和整个元音都没对上
  3. 348.8 秒。多了词尾 -d,紧接着又读了一遍还是 escaped —— 两遍都一样,不是自己改对,计错
原文When they heard Prince Darling's vow4, the cruel5 advisers6 his foster-brother and the three wicked men resolved to aum his strong anger at an old nobleman, Suliman, who had been Prince Darling's childhood tutor. He loved the prince as if he had been his own son and wished that he would always take the path of goodness. So, sometimes, as a tutor, he would correct Prince Darling's faults7. 实读When they heard Prince Darling's wow4, the cool5 advisor6 his foster-brother and the three wicked men resolved to aum his strong anger at an old nobleman, Suliman, who had been Prince Darling's childhood tutor. He loved the prince as if he had been his own son and wished that he would always take the path of goodness. So, sometimes, as a tutor, he would correct Prince Darling's fault7.
目标68 个词全对、43 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. 462.5 秒。v 读成了 w
  2. 564.2 秒。cruel 两个音节压成了一个 cool
  3. 664.6 秒。复数的 -s 没读出来
  4. 7127.3 秒。又一处复数的 -s
原文His foster-brother told Prince Darling that Suliman, the tutor, had boasted of helping Celia escape. He even paid some other8 men to lie and say that they had heard Suliman mention this. The prince, in great anger, ordered his foster-brother to bring Suliman back with a troop of soldiers. They were to chain him up and make him stand trial9 like a criminal10. 实读His foster-brother told Prince Darling that Suliman, the tutor, had boasted of helping Celia escape. He even paid some their8 men to lie and say that they had heard Suliman mention this. The prince, in great anger, ordered his foster-brother to bring Suliman back with a troop of soldiers. They were to chain him up and make him stand true9 like a creamy10.
目标63 个词全对、40 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. 8151.6 秒。前面还有一声「uh」,other 读成了 their
  2. 9192.5 秒。trial 读成 true
  3. 10194.3 秒。criminal 三个音节压成了两个
原文things. You've become a monster, continued11, "You have made yourself like the lion12 in your anger, like the wolf in your greediness13, and like a snake. You ungratefully turned upon your tutor, who was like a second father to you. Your rudeness14 has made you like a bull. Theretore, in your new form15, take the appearance of all16 these animals at once." 实读things. You've become a monster, (漏读)11, "You have made yourself like the lying12 in your anger, like the wolf in your witness13, and like a snake. You ungratefully turned upon your tutor, who was like a second father to you. Your goodness → roses →(跳过)14 has made you like a bull. Theretore, in your new from15, take the appearance of (漏读)16 these animals at once."
目标62 个词全对、40 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. 11引号外的那个叙述词整个跳过去了
  2. 12205.3 秒。lion 读成 lying,尾音换了
  3. 13213.1 秒。greediness 没读出来
  4. 14225.5–232.7 秒。这个词试了三遍:先读成 goodness,再读成 roses,第三遍直接跳过去接了 has made。计一处
  5. 15248.6 秒。form 读成 from,两个词长得太像
  6. 16all 跳过去了
原文The prince thought that the best thing he could do would be to get as far away17 from the clear lake18 as he could, so he wouldn't have to see his scary reflection anymore. Thinking19 of this, he started to run toward the wood. But before he had gotten20 far, he fell21 into a deep pit which was made to trap bears. The hunters, who were22 hiding in a23 tree, quickly jumped down, put him in heavy chains24, and led him back25 to the main city of his own kingdom. 实读The prince thought that the best thing he could do would be to get as far (漏读)17 from the clear like18 as he could, so he wouldn't have to see his scary reflection anymore. thing king19 of this, he started to run toward the wood. But before he had go → then20 far, he felt21 into a deep pit which was made to trap bears. The hunters, who are22 hiding in the23 tree, quickly jumped down, put him in heavy trees24, and led him (漏读)25 to the main city of his own kingdom.
目标90 个词全对、57 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. 17away 跳过去了
  2. 18267.8 秒。lake 读成 like,元音换了
  3. 19280.8 秒。Thinking 拆成了两个词读:thing + king
  4. 20293.2 秒。先读了个 go,停一下改成 then,两遍都不是 gotten
  5. 21297.8 秒。fell 后面多带了一个 -t
  6. 22311.2 秒。were 读成 are
  7. 23312.2 秒。a 读成 the
  8. 24315.9 秒。chains 读成 trees
  9. 25back 跳过去了
原文"Our prince26, who took pleasure only27 in 实读"Our friends26, who took pleasure (漏读)27 in
目标7 个词全对、4 秒读完就 perfect
这次读的
  1. 26332.3 秒。前面停了 4.3 秒(引号开头的新段),prince 读成了 friends
  2. 27335.1 秒。这一句最后只读出了 in —— in 是读对的,only 没出来。机器给这两个位置标的时间戳(375.5 / 376.4 秒)是生词表里的 desert / hermit被对齐算法拉过来顶上的,那两个词不是课文,见头注

🌀 读了两遍才接上的地方 · 12 处

he had, he had had the key

the he, had the key in his

the, the key in his own

escaped, escape When they heard

darlings, Darling's vow the cruel

uh, escape He even paid

uh, other men to lie

uh, to chain him up

your goodness, Your rudeness has made

roses, rudeness has made you

thing king, Thinking of this he

go, gotten far he fell

16.1 秒。原文这儿本来就是 “although he had had the key”,她把 he had 读了三遍才接上 key 19.6 秒,同一处21.8 秒,同一处47.3 秒。读了两遍,两遍都多了 -d —— 不是自己改对,计错的那一处在比对里60.4 秒。Prince Darlings 读了两遍,第二遍接上了144.7 秒150.6 秒184.6 秒。这三声「uh」都出现在一个长词或一个名字前面 —— 卡住时的填充音225.5 秒228.9 秒。rudeness 这个词试了三遍,见比对280.8 秒。Thinking 拆成了两个词,见比对293.2 秒。gotten 试了两次

🪄 画好斜线的版本

You have made yourself like the lion in your anger, / like the wolf in your greediness, / and like a snake.

📍 三把尺子上的位置

准确率 · Fountas & Pinnell 分档

偏难 要带一带 能自己读 95% 98% 上一页 89.0% 本页 92.3%

92.3% 落在「偏难」这一档 —— 比上一次(p69,89.0%)往右挪了一截,离「教学」档的 95% 还差 9 个词。349 个词错 27 处,篇幅是上一次的近四倍,一处错只占 0.29 个百分点。

每分钟正确词数 · Hasbrouck & Tindal 2017 秋季常模

二年级 三年级 四年级 五年级 本页 59 0 50 100 150 WCPM 中间一半 · 25–75 百分位 一半人在这条线上 · 50 百分位

59 个正确词/分钟,比上一次(50)快了 9 个。录音末尾那 43 秒念的是生词表,不算进这个数(也不算进时长)。母语常模只当参照系,不是及格线。

断句语调 · NAEP 朗读流利度 4 级

4整句成组读,有语调、有表情
3三四个词一组,断句基本合在意思上
2两个词一组,偶尔三四个,还没什么语调在这里
1一个词一个词往外蹦

平均 1.9 个词一组,比上一次(1.7)略成串,按 NAEP 四级量表仍是第 2 级。七次录音的停顿口径已经统一,这一项可以跨录音直接比 —— 从 65 页的 2.4 到这次的 1.9。

📐 分数是怎么来的

准确率 92.3%(读对 322 / 划线部分共 349 词)。替换、漏读、读错音计错;插入的词和退回去重读只算不流利、不计错。上面的比对一条一条列的就是这 27 处。

每分钟正确词数 59(WCPM)= 读对的 322 词 ÷ 328.7 秒 × 60。录音一共 6 分 18 秒,末尾 43 秒念的是这一课的生词表,不是这次要评的朗读 —— 那 43 秒不算进时长,图上灰底的就是它。

断句取 186 次停顿(生词表和翻页那几段的不算),平均 1.9 个词一组。停顿阈值取「说话声级 − 10 dB」(8/30 统一的口径,七次录音都一样),所以停顿类的数字可以跨录音直接比。

这次是 8 月 28 日的一段录音(`s8.mp4`),一口气读完第 70、71、72 三页的划线部分。比对基准是课本这三页红线划出的段落。发音这一项没有一个音一个音地听过,是从录音里推出来的,不如亲耳听准,所以这一项的分给得保守。

课文蓝思约 1210L 是估算,不是官方值:按蓝思公开的公式,用句子长短和生词多少来算,拿四本有官方值的英文原著校准过,整本书上误差约 50L。一次只读一两百个词,误差还会更大 —— 用来看这次比上次难还是易,别看个位数。

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